Step1:Activate(3mins)
[設(shè)計意圖]先聲奪人,激發(fā)興趣,引入主題。學(xué)生搜索并組織語言作簡要表述。
Q:? Will you share some information and meet our curiosity?
step2: Read(7mins)
[設(shè)計意圖]學(xué)生對那達(dá)慕節(jié)日的了解和作者的經(jīng)歷構(gòu)成知識差,激發(fā)學(xué)生閱讀興趣。
Q:? 1.Have ever heard of “The Naadam Festival”? How much do you know it?
2.Here is a boy who wrote down his experience in Naadam. Is it the same as what you know ?
step3: Analyze(8mins)
1.? Read the article and answer the following question.
What does “Naadam” mean?? What are the customs in Naadam?? What amazed me?
[設(shè)計意圖]把握語篇的體裁和結(jié)構(gòu),分析日記文本特點(diǎn),為寫作的謀篇布局奠定基礎(chǔ)。
2. Q:? 1. What type of writing is it?? How did the writer arrange his ideas?
Q:? When you write a diary, what should we pay much attention to?
1. The main tense: the past simple. 2. The first person: I stated the stories that happened. 3. It is usually organized by time order. 4. It is always mixed with the moods or emotions of the writers .
Q: How is the writing organized?
On the first dayI set off to....After the opening ceremony.... I saw ... wearing.... Some were... some....and others were.... The wrestling....was different.... I absolutely enjoy...but... Im finally back home now.....
T:? Share what you read with your family and tell them what interests you most.
step4: Express(10mins)
[設(shè)計意圖]通過語句欣賞和仿寫活動告訴學(xué)生,描述人或事物可以有多種手法;開篇句也可以有多種寫法。并鼓勵學(xué)生平時多閱讀、觀察、積累并嘗試寫作,形成自己獨(dú)特的寫作風(fēng)格。
Q:? How did the writer describe his feelings or emotions during the events?
表達(dá)情感的語句:Im finally back now, feeling really tired, but celebrating...was totally worth it.
仿寫: Describe one occasion and your moods:
Q:? What kind of interesting details did the writer describe?
細(xì)節(jié)描述:1.After singing ...the competitors danced onto ..., waving their arms in the air as if ...仿寫2:Describe one scene in your experience:
step5: outline(5mins)
[設(shè)計意圖]謀篇布局,確定開篇、發(fā)展和結(jié)尾。用關(guān)鍵詞表達(dá)準(zhǔn)備情況、參加活動的感受。
第一句改寫為:Ill never forget the Naadam Festival _____________________________________
1.Draft your experience according to the outline.
2.Use -ing form in your writing
Step7: Correct(4mins)
[設(shè)計意圖]通過開展自評和互評的活動,學(xué)生對自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況進(jìn)行有效的監(jiān)控、評價、反思和調(diào)整,并逐步提高用英語表達(dá)的意識和能力。
T: Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partners draft.
1.Is the writing well-organized?? ?2.Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph?
3.Does each paragraph include the necessary details? 4.Does the writer describe his or her feelings and emotions? 5.Does the writer use the -ing form correctly in the writing?
教學(xué)反思:在我國,除了共同的重要節(jié)日外,因歷史、地域等因素流傳下來的民族節(jié)日也非常豐富。這些節(jié)日往往擁有悠久的歷史和獨(dú)特的風(fēng)俗。因此,教師應(yīng)鼓勵學(xué)生去探究和了解不同民族的節(jié)日,讓他們學(xué)會用英語表達(dá)。這樣,不僅可以提高學(xué)生的信息處理能力和語言表達(dá)能力,還能讓他們開闊眼界,培養(yǎng)愛國主義情懷,形成跨文化溝通和文化傳播的能力。
【作者簡介】文海霞(1980.07-),女,漢族,濟(jì)南歷城人,濟(jì)南市歷城第二中學(xué),中教一級,研究生,研究方向:英語教學(xué)。