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You are an exchange student Jenny.You want to recommend Bob to be your new monitor. Fill in the blanks first. Then write a letter to your class teacher. Use adj. and adv. more. (About 80 words)

本期的兩篇文章是命題作文，屬于提建議的類型。同學們可以和這期專題的兩篇議論文對比一下。專題的文章是闡述為何喜歡足球，而這兩篇是闡述為何推薦某人為班長。

Dear teacher,

I want to recommend Bob to be our new monitor.

It is clear that he has a lot of strong qualities for this position.

First of all, he is such a helpful person that he is ready to give a helping hand any time .If we have any trouble, he will listen to us carefully and then offer us useful advice.

Besides, we all think him smart. He is able to solve difficult problems easily. It is quite simple for him to achieve a balance between his hobby and his schoolwork.

Moreover, he is con fident. He believes that he can do almost anything if he tries his best. Also, he does things carefully and never forgets the things he needs to do.

In my opinion, nobody else is more suitable than him. We hope that you can agree with me.

Yours,

Jenny

南京市浦口區(qū)行知中學 九年級（一）班 朱瑞陽

李維玉老師點評：

本文主旨明確，思路清晰，正確運用語法句法，形容詞和副詞使用得當，多處使用了關(guān)系連詞，文章銜接自然。

Dear teacher,

I want to recommend Bob to be our new monitor. Bob, the most helpful student in our class, is the person who can be a good monitor. He is ready to offer us help any time. Also, it is quite organized of him to keep all his

things in good order.

Morever, Bob is such a clever boy that he can work out all the maths questions which we don’t understand. He always does his homework carefully and all the teachers think highly of him.

In my opinion, Bob is the most suitable boy to be our monitor.Do you think so?

I hope my advice is worth taking.

Yours,

Jenny

南京市浦口區(qū)行知中學 九年級（一）班 吳蕊

李維玉老師點評：

文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，正確運用形容詞和副詞及其多種形式，賓語從句和定語從句，為文章錦上添花。