江海連
情境呈現(xiàn)
假定你的老師讓你在班級分享自己的健康報告,請你按以下要點寫一篇80詞左右的文章。內(nèi)容包括:
1.?過去——身體虛弱,經(jīng)常感冒;
2.?現(xiàn)在——養(yǎng)成早起鍛煉的好習(xí)慣,悅納自己;
3.?結(jié)果及感想。
寫作指導(dǎo)
Step?1?文體感知
學(xué)生可以在健康報告中交流關(guān)于健康生活的心得體會。寫作時,可以從“鍛煉(exercise)、減壓(reduce?stress)、自信(selfconfidence)及健康飲食(healthy?eating)”等方面入手,也可以從自己或他人的過去與現(xiàn)在的對比入手??傊?,寫健康報告的目的就是喚醒他人或自己對健康的認(rèn)知,從而建立起健康的生活模式。
Step?2?謀篇布局
Step?3?語言組織
詞塊積累
healthy/fit?健康的
unhealthy/unfit?不健康的
green?food?綠色食品
healthy?diet?健康飲食
good?living?habits?好的生活習(xí)慣
overweight?肥胖
lose?weight?減重
enough?sleep?充足的睡眠
build?up?oneself?強身健體
go?on?a?diet?節(jié)食
form?a?healthy?eating?habit?養(yǎng)成一個健康的飲食習(xí)慣
be?in?poor?health?不健康
be?good?for?one?s?health?對某人的健康有益
句子積累
1.?I?d?like?to?share?my?ideas?involving?how?to?keep?healthy?physically?and?mentally.?我想分享一下我關(guān)于如何保持身心健康的想法。
2.?We?are?doing?sports?to?keep?healthy.?我們進(jìn)行體育運動是為了保持健康。
3.?I?worried?about?my?weight?and?tried?every?new?diet?I?read?about?online.?我擔(dān)心自己的體重,并嘗試了我在網(wǎng)上讀到的每一種新的飲食方法。
4.?I?almost?went?bananas.?我快要發(fā)瘋了。
5.?Once?I?started?thinking?about?health?rather?than?weight,?things?began?to?change.?一旦我開始考慮健康問題而不是體重問題,事情就開始改變了。
6.?Rather?than?cutting?out?the?foods?I?enjoyed,?I?added?healthy?foods?to?my?meals.?我并沒有減少我喜歡的食物,而是在我的食物中添加了健康的食物。
7.?Taking?exercise?does?make?a?difference!?鍛煉確實會有很大的作用!
8.?I?want?to?be?able?to?do?30?pushups?every?day.?我想每天都能做30個俯臥撐。
9.?Stop?comparing?yourself?with?actresses?and?models.?不要再把自己與女演員和模特做比較了。
10.?By?being?positive?about?myself?and?my?body,?I?became?both?happier?and?healthier.?通過悅納自己和自己的身體,我變得更快樂、更健康。
過渡語
as?a?result?結(jié)果
instead?反而
however?然而
after?that?在那之后
what?s?more?而且
then?然后
now?現(xiàn)在
佳作欣賞
When?I?was?young,?I?was?so?weak?that?I?caught?a?cold?now?and?then.?As?a?result,?it?was?difficult?for?me?to?go?to?school?like?other?children.
Then?I?read?an?article?that?said?jogging?in?the?morning?would?make?a?difference?to?health.?In?order?to?change?myself,?I?follow?the?advice?and?do?it?every?day.?After?that,?I?form?the?habit?of?getting?up?early?and?jogging?for?half?an?hour.?What?s?more,?I?am?more?positive?about?myself?and?my?body.
Now,?my?body?is?building?up?by?working?out?every?day,?which?is?good?for?my?daily?life.
即時訓(xùn)練
你所在的班級即將舉行健康報告分享活動,請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇80詞左右的文章。
1.?以前:吃垃圾食品,不鍛煉;
2.?現(xiàn)在:平衡膳食,堅持鍛煉;
3.?你的體會。