高考英語感謝信專題輔導(dǎo)與原創(chuàng)練習(xí)

雷康成

感謝信屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，正文通常包括以下三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：

（1）表達(dá)感謝之情并說明理由；

（2）描述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助；

（3）再次闡明謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)、愿望或祝愿。

分析歷年高考英語作文真題發(fā)現(xiàn)，高考真題中并沒有以感謝信的形式命題，而是把感謝這一內(nèi)容作為寫作的一個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行考查。

一、常用套語

1. 相關(guān)單詞

2. 相關(guān)短語

表達(dá)“因（做了）某事而感謝您”的短語或句式有：

（1）thank you for （doing） sth.

（2）be thankful to you for（doing） sth.

（2）be grateful to you for （doing） sth.

（3）express my thanks to you for （doing） sth.

（4）express /show our gratitude to you for （doing） sth.

（5）show my hearty thanks to you for （doing） sth. 向你表達(dá)我衷心的感謝

（6）convey / express my heartfelt appreciation to you向你表達(dá)我衷心的感謝

3. 相關(guān)句子

（1）I am grateful to you for your patience， expertise and genuine concern.對(duì)于你們的耐心、專業(yè)精神和關(guān)心我表示深深地感謝。

（2）I would like to take this opportunity to express our gratitude to you for your timely help.我謹(jǐn)借此機(jī)會(huì)感謝您給予我們的及時(shí)幫助。

（3）I am writing to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for the warm welcome you extended to my friend Kevin when he visited your school last week. 我寫這封信是為了對(duì)你在我的朋友Kevin去參觀你們學(xué)校時(shí)給予的熱情歡迎表示衷心的感謝。

（4） If it had not been for your help /But for your help during my one years stay in New York， I wouldnt have adapted to it so quickly.在紐約的這一年里，若不是你給予的幫助，我不會(huì)適應(yīng)得這么快。

（5）Please accept my sincere thanks for your participating in todays lecture.請(qǐng)接受我最誠摯的感謝，謝謝你參加今天的講座。

二、高考真題

1.（2006安徽）假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，剛回到國內(nèi)?；貒竽惆l(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫一封信，請(qǐng)他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：

[第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助。

參考范文：I am truly grateful to you for all the kindness I got from you during my stay in the US.

2. （2008全國卷 I）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda），一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站（website）關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：

[第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝工作人員。

參考范文：Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks /gratitude to you for your hard work， because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

3.（2009山東）假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的美國老師Mr. Smith，但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國同學(xué)Tom 寫一封信：

[第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝Tom對(duì)你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助。

參考范文：I am writing to extend my gratitude to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in the US. Additionally， your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.

4. 2010重慶）假設(shè)你是李華，于2010年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個(gè)行李箱（suitcase）?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們幫你尋找。

[第四個(gè)要點(diǎn)]期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。

參考范文：Please accept my sincere appreciation for your help and kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

5.（2010陜西）假定你是李華。你們學(xué)校和一所美國中學(xué)簽署了教師交流協(xié)議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學(xué)的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。寫作要點(diǎn)：

[第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)]對(duì)她表達(dá)感謝之意。

參考范文：We all miss you and please accept our sincere thanks for what you did for us.

6.（2013重慶）調(diào)查顯示，中國長江江豚（finless porpoise）受人類活動(dòng)影響而頻臨滅絕，目前總數(shù)不足1000只。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給WWF（世界自然保護(hù)基金組織）寫一封信，請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注這一狀況并提供幫助。

[第四個(gè)要點(diǎn)]表示感謝并期待回復(fù)。

參考范文：Thank you very much for your attention to it and kind help and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

7. （2014山東）假如你是李華，作為你們學(xué)校交換生的Tracy即將結(jié)束她在中國的學(xué)習(xí)生活并返回英國，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇?dú)g送稿。

[第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝她對(duì)大家英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助。

參考范文：It is due to her help that every one of us has made great progress. Therefore， I would like to take this opportunity to express our heartfelt appreciation to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a debt of gratitude to her.

三、省市模擬題

1.（2016廣東省適應(yīng)性測(cè)試）假定你是李華，負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)校英文廣播站。請(qǐng)你給廣播站的顧問Dr. your Brown寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加廣播站十周年慶典。要點(diǎn)如下：

[第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝他的指導(dǎo)。

I am truly grateful to you for having been our consultant for such a long time. If it had not been for your guidance， our broadcast station wouldnt have made so great progress and wouldnt have been that popular with the students.

2.（2016深圳二模）假定你是李華，你所在的“中國剪紙文化的傳承（inheritance）和發(fā)展”課題研究小組剛剛獲得今年的“中國大智匯創(chuàng)新研究挑戰(zhàn)賽（China Thinks Big 2016）”二等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你寫信給你的外籍教師史密斯先生，感謝他一直以來對(duì)你們的支持與幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：

[第四個(gè)要點(diǎn)]感謝與祝愿。

I am thankful to you for your unselfish assistance and support all the time and I like to convey my sincere wishes for your happiness and health.

四、原創(chuàng)練習(xí)

1. 假定你是李華，你所喜愛的《21世紀(jì)報(bào) · 中學(xué)生版》（21st Century-School Edition）創(chuàng)刊16周年之際征集讀者意見。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：

（1）說明你是忠實(shí)讀者。

（2）感謝該報(bào)對(duì)你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助。

（3）贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

（4）提出建議。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語己為你寫好；

（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Editor-in-Chief，

Congratulations on the 16th anniversary of 21st？Century-School Edition！

……

2. 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知國際中學(xué)生組織將舉辦一次給世界各國新生贈(zèng)送二手課本的活動(dòng)，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容主要包括：

（1）個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷；

（2）表達(dá)參加意圖及原因；

（3）希望獲準(zhǔn)并表示感謝。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語己為你寫好；

（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam，

…

Looking forward to your reply！

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

參考范文：

1.

Dear Editor-in-Chief，

Congratulations on the 16th anniversary of 21st Century-School Edition！

Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I am truly grateful to your newspaper for the help it has been giving to me in studying English. If it had not been for the guidance of your newspaper， I wouldnt have acquired so much knowledge. I like it very much for the reason that it not only provides a great variety of the latest news at home and abroad but also covers a wide range of interesting topics. In my view， it would be better if 21st Century-School Edition carries more articles to guide us in our English writing， and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

2.

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im Li Hua， an 18-year-old middle school student from China. I read from the Internet the announcement of an activity that you will hold to give the second-hand textbooks to newcomers as gifts at the very beginning of a new term and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to participate in it. I aim to take part in it not only because I tend to save the resources and help the poor students but also because I attempt to inspire other students who used the book to work harder. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your activity. And Id like to express my thanks to you if you would consider choosing me to be one.

Looking forward to your reply！

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua

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