2022年6月大學(xué)英語四、六級(jí)作文試題評(píng)析（一）

四? ? ? 級(jí)

Directions： Suppose you are writing a proposal to your school library for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and solutions. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

這道2022年大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文試題要求考生給學(xué)校圖書館寫一份改善其服務(wù)的建議書，內(nèi)容包括圖書館存在的問題及解決辦法。

建議書是一種常見的應(yīng)用文，一般包括四個(gè)部分：標(biāo)題、稱呼、正文、署名。本文的標(biāo)題可以寫A Proposal for Improving School Library Service。稱呼可以寫Dear Director。正文可以寫成三段。第一段先表明自己的身份，然后說明寫作目的：為了改善學(xué)校圖書館的服務(wù)而提出建議。第二段指出學(xué)校圖書館存在的問題并提出解決辦法。圖書館的問題可能有很多方面，考生可以根據(jù)自己的知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備自由發(fā)揮，但最好從學(xué)生能親身體驗(yàn)到的方面來談。比如，圖書資料陳舊、管理員態(tài)度冷淡、環(huán)境糟糕、數(shù)字化程度低等。我們最好從兩三個(gè)方面闡述，指出一個(gè)問題，緊接著就提出解決辦法。第三段先指出圖書館對(duì)于學(xué)校的重要性，然后建議采取有效措施，以保證學(xué)校圖書館的圖書經(jīng)常更新以及管理員接受專業(yè)訓(xùn)練。最后是署名，寫在正文之下中間偏右位置，可以寫Li Ming。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

A Proposal for Improving School Library Service

Dear Director，

I am a freshman of Shanghai University. I am writing to put forward a proposal to improve the service of our school library.

There are mainly two problems besetting the library. First， the books and materials are in bad need of updating. Many students have stopped patronizing it because they cannot find relevant academic materials. A possible solution is to urge the school authorities to channel more funds to the library. Another problem is lack of professional staff. A good library is one staffed with smiling librarians， ready to lend a helping hand when they see a student has trouble finding a book. But the librarians in our library are mostly unsmiling， unhelpful and unfriendly. This problem can be solved by hiring more high-calibre professionals.

The library is the heart of a university and plays a key role in students academic life. I hope that effective measures will be taken to ensure that books are regularly updated and staff professionally trained.

Li Ming （170 words）

語言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. There are mainly two problems besetting the library.主要有兩個(gè)問題困擾著圖書館。besetting the library是現(xiàn)在分詞短語做定語，修飾problems。

2. A good library is one staffed with smiling librarians， ready to lend a helping hand when they see a student has trouble finding a book.好的圖書館配備有笑容滿面的管理員，看到學(xué)生找書有困難會(huì)伸出援助之手。staffed with smiling librarians是過去分詞短語做定語，修飾one。have trouble/difficulty doing sth做某事有困難。

3. The library is the heart of a university and plays a key role in students academic life.圖書館是大學(xué)的核心，在學(xué)生的學(xué)術(shù)生活中起著關(guān)鍵作用。

4. I hope that effective measures will be taken to ensure that books are regularly updated and staff professionally trained. 我希望將會(huì)采取有效措施，以保證圖書經(jīng)常更新、員工受到專業(yè)培訓(xùn)。

六? ? ? 級(jí)

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Nowadays more and more people keep learning new skills to adapt to a fast-changing world.” You can make comments， cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

這道2022年6月的大學(xué)英語六級(jí)作文試題屬于分析現(xiàn)象型作文，其特點(diǎn)是題目提出一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)考生分析。本題所要分析的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象是如今越來越多的人不斷學(xué)習(xí)新技能，以適應(yīng)快速變化的世界。

我們可以把這篇作文寫成三個(gè)段落。第一段先提出所要分析的現(xiàn)象——如今越來越多的人不斷學(xué)習(xí)新技能，以適應(yīng)快速變化的世界。為了言之有據(jù)，接著引用一項(xiàng)在上海所做的研究作為支撐。第二段分析這個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，可以從分析原因的角度展開。為了使分析充分透徹，我們要善于從不同的方面或?qū)用嬲归_論述。就本文而言，我們不妨把“越來越多的人”分成年輕人和老年人，分別地討論他們不斷學(xué)習(xí)新技能的原因。第一，年輕人學(xué)習(xí)新技能是為了發(fā)展自己的職業(yè)。在快速變化的職場(chǎng)，年輕人如果不能保持自己的技能經(jīng)常更新，他們就會(huì)失去競(jìng)爭力，很容易被取代。第二，老年人學(xué)習(xí)新技能是為了保持頭腦敏捷。為了論證這一點(diǎn)，可以以自己80歲的爺爺為例：他最近報(bào)名參加了一門電腦課程，現(xiàn)在他會(huì)自己重裝電腦系統(tǒng)，更不用說網(wǎng)上沖浪和網(wǎng)購。本文可以用建議法結(jié)尾。第三段先總結(jié)全文，指出學(xué)習(xí)并非止于畢業(yè)。在這個(gè)不斷變化的世界上，無論是為了事業(yè)還是為了健康，我們都必須不斷學(xué)習(xí)。最后建議大家每天都要學(xué)習(xí)新東西。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Nowadays more and more people keep learning new skills to adapt to a fast-changing world. A recent study surveyed 1，000 adults from a wide spectrum of professions in Shanghai and found that 84.1 percent of those polled said they were learning one new skill or another.

Young people expand their skill base mainly to improve their career. For them， learning new things is more requirement than choice. If they dont keep their skills up to date in todays rapidly changing workplace， they will stop being competitive and can easily get replaced. For senior citizens， however， learning new skills is an effective way to keep mentally active. Take my 80-year-old grandpa as an example. He recently signed up for a computer course. It has worked wonders. He can now reinstall the operating system of his computer， not to mention surfing the Web and shopping online.

Learning does not necessarily end when you graduate from school. Whether for health or career purposes， learning new skills is a must in this constantly changing world. So make it your goal to learn something new each and every day！ （184 words）

語言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. If they dont keep their skills up to date in todays rapidly changing workplace， they will stop being competitive and can easily get replaced.如果他們不能在今天快速變化的職場(chǎng)上不斷更新自己的技能，他們就會(huì)失去競(jìng)爭力，很容易被代替。up to date最新的。

2. It has worked wonders.這已經(jīng)收到奇效。

3. He can now reinstall the operating system of his computer， not to mention surfing the Web and shopping online.他現(xiàn)在會(huì)自己重裝電腦系統(tǒng)，更不用說上網(wǎng)沖浪和上網(wǎng)購物了。not to mention更不用說。

4. Whether for health or career purposes， learning new skills is a must in this constantly changing world.不管是為了健康還是為了事業(yè)，學(xué)習(xí)新技能在這個(gè)迅速變化的世界上都是必須的。must必須做的事。

賈從永 上海外國語大學(xué)國際新聞碩士，講師，專注大學(xué)英語寫作教學(xué)十余年。

《論語》英譯選登

見義不為，無勇也。

Failing to take action at the critical moment shows a lack of courage.

人而不仁，如禮何？人而不仁，如樂何？

If a man is virtueless， what do rituals mean to him？ If a man is virtueless， what does music mean to him？

子入太廟，每事問。

Every time he entered the Ancestral Temple， Confucius would ask about everything.

里仁為美。

Its nice to dwell in a benevolent neighborhood.

不仁者不可以久處約，不可以長處樂。

The virtueless cannot live for long either in poverty or in comfort.

朝聞道，夕死可矣。

If I were told of the truth in the morning， I could die willingly even in the evening.

士志于道，而恥惡衣惡食者，未足與議也。

It is not worthwhile to talk about the truth with scholars who， while pursuing the truth， feel it a shame to live off bad clothes and poor food.

（《〈論語〉最新英文全譯全注本》，吳國珍，福建教育出版社，2012）