溫從秀
素養(yǎng)解讀
求職信是寫信人就某一職位向收信人提出請(qǐng)求的信件。它通常包括三部分內(nèi)容:1. 闡述招聘信息的來(lái)源與所申請(qǐng)的職位;2. 簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人信息;3. 強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的能力并請(qǐng)求給予面試機(jī)會(huì)。求職信的語(yǔ)言屬于正式用語(yǔ),要用詞簡(jiǎn)潔、準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)氣禮貌、自信,所給信息要具有可信度。
素材金庫(kù)
一、常用詞塊
1. 主修……專業(yè) major in...
2. (可)勝任…… be qualified for...
3. 精通……/對(duì)……掌握熟練 have a good command/knowledge of...
4. 申請(qǐng) apply for
5. 與……相處融洽 get along well with...
6. 對(duì)……樂(lè)觀? be optimistic about...
7. 和諧的人際關(guān)系a harmonious interpersonal relationship
8. 滿足你們的資歷要求 meet your qualifications
9. 在……方面有豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn) have rich experience in.../be experienced in...
10. 在你方便的時(shí)候進(jìn)行面談 have a personal interview at your convenience
11. 開(kāi)闊眼界 broaden ones vision/horizons
12. 責(zé)任感/成就感 a sense of responsibility/achievement
二、常用句式
1. 從你們的廣告中我得知你們正在招聘一名……
I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a(n)...
2. 如果你們能夠給我提供這樣的機(jī)會(huì),我將十分感激。
I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
3. 一旦被錄用,我將竭盡所能把工作做好。
Once hired, I will devote myself to the post.
4. 我盼望著你盡快回復(fù)。
I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
5. 用電話或電子郵件聯(lián)系我。
I can be reached by telephone/email.
考題回放
假定你叫李華,你校外籍教師Angel暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本市開(kāi)一家西餐店,要招聘若干名暑期兼職人員。請(qǐng)根據(jù)右圖,給Angel寫一份求職申請(qǐng)信,申請(qǐng)?jiān)摴ぷ鳌?/p>
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:住宿 accommodation
Dear Angel,
I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.
I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇書面表達(dá)從命題形式上來(lái)看,屬于圖文結(jié)合類的寫作,要求考生根據(jù)所給的廣告給西餐店寫一封信,申請(qǐng)?jiān)摴ぷ鳌奈捏w上來(lái)看,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的申請(qǐng)信寫作。
佳作賞析
Dear Angel,
I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.
As a Senior 3 student, I have a good command of English and I am fluent in spoken English. I shall be free during the summer vacation. So I have decided to find something interesting to do and I think the job is the very thing Id like to do.
The job will benefit me a lot. Itll offer me some valuable work experience as well as the opportunity to practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you. Besides, I really enjoy making friends and communicating with foreigners. I would appreciate it if Im offered the job. I believe I can be of great help to you.
I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
本篇范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn)。正文部分包括了寫作背景和意圖、個(gè)人身份、個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)、求職態(tài)度等基本要素。文章的要點(diǎn)安排也較符合邏輯。文章使用了一些基本的話題表達(dá),語(yǔ)言較為得體和準(zhǔn)確。段落中心句“The job will benefit me a lot.”和高級(jí)句式 “I would appreciate it if...”的使用增加了文章的得分點(diǎn)。
再試鋒芒
假定你是李華,你從某網(wǎng)站上得知當(dāng)?shù)氐牟┪镳^正在招募暑假英語(yǔ)講解員,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,給博物館負(fù)責(zé)外國(guó)游客接待的Mr Jason寫一封英文求職信。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 表達(dá)意愿;
2. 求職理由;
3. 懇請(qǐng)獲準(zhǔn)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯: 講解員 interpreter
Dear Mr Jason,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua