My habits

安徽省宣城市第八中學九年級（1）班 王興宇

Hello,mynameis Wang Xingyu.I’m a middle schoolstudent. I’m seventeen years old and a naughtyboywho is more than 1.8 meters tall.

I always go to bed early and get up early to read books.It can not only make me feel peaceful and relaxed,but also open up my eyes.I am also a hard-working boy and I often help my parents with housework as possible as I can.What’s more,I like to take part in some activities,such as swimming,dancing and traveling.

However,I also have some bad habits.I usually eat junk food instead of fruit and vegetables.So I’m becoming more and more fat.Another bad habit for me is that I always spend a lot of time watching TV in my spare time.

These are my habits.I’ll develop my good habits and give up the bad ones,and I’m sure I’ll become happier and healthier.

【教師點評】

這是一篇介紹個人習慣的習作。全文主題突出，結構合理，詳略得當。however,as possible as I can,what’s more等詞語及定語從句、賓語從句等的運用，增加了文章的文采。但如能將第三段中的more and more fat改為fatter and fatter，則表達會更加恰當。