好句子的表達(dá)技巧

羅婷

書(shū)面表達(dá)要求同學(xué)們有豐富的詞匯和語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力。造句能力顯得特別重要。好句子能夠生動(dòng)、形象、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，要寫(xiě)好句子必須從理論上掌握英語(yǔ)句子的特點(diǎn)，首先應(yīng)該熟悉五種基本句型，其次還要注意英漢兩種語(yǔ)言的差別，要注重邏輯性，體現(xiàn)句子和句子之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系。

句型策略技巧

1. 改變語(yǔ)態(tài)

①He has made much progress in his English. （一般）

Much progress has been made in his English. （高級(jí)）

②We should make efforts to reduce air pollution. （一般）

Great efforts must be made to reduce air pollution. （高級(jí)）

2. 合并句子

①China is a large country .It has a large population.（一般）

China is a large country with a large population. （高級(jí)）

②He enjoys playing football. He also enjoys playing basketball. （一般）

He enjoys not only football but also basketball. （高級(jí)）

3. 使用短語(yǔ)

①Our city has change a lot in the past few years. （一般）

Great changes have taken place in our city in the past few years. （高級(jí)）

②The quality of the car is good. The price of the car is reasonable as well. （一般）

In addition to its good quality， the price of the car is reasonable as well. （高級(jí)）

4. 使用不定式

①She hurried to the school， but the school had closed. （一般）

She hurried to the school only to find that the school had closed. （高級(jí)）

②We will have a discussion about the problem at the meeting that will be held tomorrow. （一般）

We will have a discussion about the problem at the meeting to be held tomorrow. （高級(jí)）

5. 使用過(guò)去分詞

①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. （一般）

She walked out of the lab followed by many students. （高級(jí)）

②I found that a new teacher was sitting at the back of the classroom. （一般）

I found a new teacher seated at the back of the classroom. （高級(jí)）

6. 使用V—ing 形式

①When he arrives， please give me an e-mail. （一般）

On his arriving， please give me an e-mail. （高級(jí)）

②I hear that he is singing an English song in the next room. （一般）

I hear him singing an English song in the next room. （高級(jí)）

7. 使用定語(yǔ)從句

①I(mǎi) paid $5 for the book. The book is well worth reading. （一般）

The book for which I paid $5 is well worth reading. （高級(jí)）

②We worked together for peace in those days.We wont forget those days. （一般）

We wont forget those days when we worked together for peace. （高級(jí)）

8. 使用名詞性從句

①He was late again and it made me angry. （一般）

It made me angry that he was late again. （高級(jí)）

②It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up. （一般）

The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody. （高級(jí)）

9. 使用狀語(yǔ)從句或具有句子意義的介詞短語(yǔ)

①I(mǎi)t was raining heavily， but they went on with the work. （一般）

Despite the heavy rain， they went on with the work. （高級(jí)）

②If you come back before six oclock， you can go out. （一般）

You can go out on condition that you come back before six oclock. （高級(jí)）

10. 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句

①I(mǎi) lost my wallet in the park the other day. （一般）

It was in the park that I lost my wallet. （高級(jí)）

②He did not attend the meeting because of illness. （一般）

It was because of illness that he failed to attend the meeting. （高級(jí)）

11. 使用省略句

①I(mǎi) have not succeeded， but I hope that I can succeed. （一般）

I have not succeeded， but I hope to. （高級(jí)）

②If it is necessary， you can turn to your teacher for help. （一般）

If necessary， you can turn to your teacher for help. （高級(jí)）

12. 使用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

①I(mǎi) did not go to bed until midnight. （一般）

Not until midnight did I go to bed. （高級(jí)）

②We suffered from cold and hunger in those days .The days are gone. （一般）

Gone are the days when we suffered from cold and hunger. （高級(jí)）

假定你是某雜志社編輯Linda，收到某中學(xué)生李華的來(lái)信，他說(shuō)因不善于交友而倍感苦惱。請(qǐng)你以Linda的名義根據(jù)下面提示給他寫(xiě)封回信，并適當(dāng)提出建議。

提示：1. 友善、樂(lè)于助人；2. 多與他人交流；3. 多參加活動(dòng)。

注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Li Hua，

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Yours sincerely，

Linda

習(xí)作一

Dear Li Hua，

How is it going？ I have known that you have trouble in making friends with others. But you dont worried about it. Here are some suggestions which may be of use to you.

First of all， you should make it clear that kindness is the base of friendship. So you should show your friendliness to others and help them whenever it is necessary. Besides， you should often communicate with people and gradually know each other. Last but not least， you should make most of your time to take active part in activities if possible. As we all know， true friends never come easily. Take more time to communicate with others is very important.

I always believe that friends play an important role in our life. So Im looking forward to receiving the news that you have got along well with others and found true friends.

Yours sincerely，

Linda

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇中檔習(xí)作。優(yōu)點(diǎn)有：

（1）在文章開(kāi)頭恰到好處地使用了be of use句型；在行文中，用First of all， Besides， Last but not least逐一提出解決問(wèn)題的建議，使文章很有條理。

（2）作者運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，如：gradually， have trouble in doing， be of use， make most of， play an important role in， look forward to doing， get along well with等，文章語(yǔ)言豐富。

（3）運(yùn)用了一些不同的、較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。如：

Here are some suggestions which may be ... （定語(yǔ)從句）

... you should make it clear that ... （it作形式賓語(yǔ)）

... whenever it is necessary. （讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）

As we all know ... （非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）

So Im looking forward to receiving the news that ... （同位語(yǔ)從句）

不足之處：

（1）有些地方用詞不夠準(zhǔn)確或語(yǔ)法方面錯(cuò)誤。如：“... dont worried about it”應(yīng)改為“... neednt be worried about it”；“take active part in activities”應(yīng)改為“take an active part in activities”；“Take more time to communicate ... is important.”應(yīng)改為“It is important to take time to communicate ...”

（3）部分過(guò)渡詞使用不當(dāng)以及部分句式重復(fù)使用多次。如第一段中but和第二、三段中so，可以嘗試使用不同的高級(jí)詞匯，如however，thus，therefore， as a result等。又如第二段“... you should show your friendliness ...”， “... you should often communicate with ...”和“... you should make most use of”，句式結(jié)構(gòu)單一，不妨改變句式結(jié)構(gòu)，改為“... communicate with people， and you will gradually know each other.”，第三句改為“... youre supposed to make most use of your time to take an active part in activities， which will do good to you.”，使句式結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化。

習(xí)作二

Dear Li Hua，

Im sorry that youre feeling worried to make friends. Id like to make some suggestions， from which you may benefit a lot.

First of all， be friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others. The more you help others， the more they will feel like making friends with you. Secondly， what is known to us is that comumunication can avoid misunderstandings. You will make more friends as long as you communicate with others. Thirdly， there is no doubt that taking an active part in activities is a good way to make friends. Most importantly， friends should be faithful to each other， which is of great use.

As the saying goes， a life without a friend is a life without a sun. It is friendship that really counts in our life. Only when you know how to make friends can your problem be solved. I firmly believe that you can develop a good friendship with others.

Yours sincerely，

Linda

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇高檔習(xí)作。

（1）本文分段合理，語(yǔ)言得體，行文流暢，表意連貫。

（2）使用了豐富的高級(jí)詞匯。如：avoid， faithful， count， frimly， develop， make some suggestions， benefit from， be ready to do， take an active part in等。

（3）中還運(yùn)用了較多的靈活多變的高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。如：

Id like to make some suggestions， from which you may ... （非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）

The more you help others， the more they will feel like ... （比較級(jí)）

... what is known to us is that ... （名詞性從句）

... as long as you communicate more with others ... （條件狀語(yǔ)從句）

There is no doubt that ... （固定句型）

It is friendship that really counts ... （強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

Only when we know how to make friends can your problem ... （倒裝句）