運用多種句式,巧寫建議類書面表達

陶 乾

[摘要]近年來建議類書面表達已成為高考寫作的重要內(nèi)容。本文談了如何運用多種表達,寫好建議要求類書面表達。

[關(guān)鍵詞]建議類書面表達 寫作方法

近年來,隨著對外交流的日益擴大,建議類書面表達已成為高考寫作的重要內(nèi)容。因為,此類話題不僅接近對外交流的實際情景,而且能夠考察出學生運用課本知識寫英語書面表達的能力,因此,受到了考試專家的青睞。下面就以近兩年來高考命題的實例,談一下如何運用多種表達,寫好建議要求類書面表達。

例一:2009年陜西卷

假定你是李華。在一個英文網(wǎng)論壇上,你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助,請根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容,寫作要點和要求回帖。

Grown-up Post at 18—5—2009 20:08 1﹟

Hi,eeryone,

Im 17 years old and Im going to uniersity this autumn.But my mother contines to treat me as a seenyear-old.What should I do?

Top寫作要點:

1.告訴Grown-up要理解母親。

2.給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議。

3.書寫須清晰、工整。

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age,I understand your situation.例二:2008全國卷(Ⅱ)

假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫封回信。要點:1.參加中文學習班。

2.看中文書刊、電視。

3.學唱中文歌曲。

4.叫中國朋友。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可適當增加細節(jié)。

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

June 8.2008

Dear Peter,

Im glad to receie your letter asking for my adice on how to learn Chinese well.

以上兩篇書面表達都是以建議為主體的書面表達,在實際寫作中,學生往往只會使用you should、I adise sb to do sth,I suggest doing sth或I adise+that-clause,I suggest+that-clause等簡單的構(gòu)造,幾乎是千篇一律,很難表達出變化,表達缺乏新意,結(jié)果出現(xiàn)了雖對猶敗的現(xiàn)象(即:雖然寫得沒錯,但得不了高分)。那么,寫這類文章如何寫出新意,寫出變化,得高分呢?只要你看了教材中關(guān)于表達建議的知識規(guī)納,相信你一定能有所啟示。

一、疑問表達法

1.What do you think of /about…?

2.Hae you considered / thought of doing…?

3.Why dont you…?

4.How about…?

5.Why not do…?

6.Wouldt it be better if you…?

二、被動表達法

1.Youre suggested (not) doing…

2.Youre adised (not) to do…

3.Youre supposed (not) to do…

4.Youre expected (not) to do…

三、從句表達法

1.My suggestion / adice is + that—clause(從句用虛擬語氣)

2.I adise /suggest + that—clause(從句用虛擬語氣)

3.That—claccse(從句用虛擬) + is my adice /suggestion.

4.It is suggested / adised + that—clause(從句用虛擬語氣)

5.What I want to suggest/ adise is + that—clause…

四、it作形式主語表達法

1.It + should /will be + wise / better / adisable / important / helpful等adj+to do…

2.It is/should be a good idea to do…

以上,我們對高中教材中表達建議的常用句型進行了簡單的歸納,只要大家牢牢記住上面的句型,在實際寫作中多運用,注意變化,就一定能夠?qū)懗霰磉_建議的好文章。

例如:你建議對方要和媽媽進行深入交流時,不妨使用下面的句型來表達:

1.Hae you considered / thought of haing heart-to-heart talks with your mother?

2.Youre expected / adised /supposed to hae heart-to-heart talks with your mother.3.How about haing a heart-to-heart talk with your mother?

4.What I want to suggest/ adise is that you (should) hae some heart-to-heart talks with your mother.5.In my opinion it is/should be a good idea to hae some heart-to-heart talks with your mother.

你建議對方交中國朋友時,我們可以使用下面的句型來表達:

1.What do you think of /about making some more Chinese friends?

2.You're suggested making some more Chinese friends.

3.My suggestion / adice is that you should make some more Chinese friends.

4.It should /will be wise / better / adisable / important / helpful to make some more Chinese friends.