My Spring Festival2

During the Spring Festival， I paste the spring couplets， make dumplings， set off fireworks， and celebrate with my family. In addition（除此以外）， on Chinese New Year’s Eve， I always play with my friends. We build snowmen and have snowball fights. Our hearts are filled with joy. I love Spring Festival！

五（3）班 陳錦汐

The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. During this festival， I often help my mother clean the house and stick red couplets. On the Spring Festival Eve， all my family members get together and have a big dinner. Then we light fireworks. My parents give me red packets. I’m very happy.

五（7）班 孫楷軼

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. During this festival， you will find most people dressed in colourful clothes， all wearing big smiles. In my family， we exchange our blessings（祝福）. At night， we have dinner together. I love the Spring Festival so much！

六（4）班 陳科名

My family often do many interesting things during the Spring Festival. We often place the “Fu” character upside down（顛倒的） on the door. That means good luck will come. We also make a lot of dumplings， with a coin hidden in some of them. We believe that “l(fā)ucky coin” brings luck in the coming year.

六（7）班 梅錦昆

指導(dǎo)老師點(diǎn)評(píng)

小作者們能很好地使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一些頻率副詞來(lái)描述自己的春節(jié)。陳錦汐和孫楷軼突出介紹了除夕夜，他們關(guān)于“貼春聯(lián)”“放煙花”“除夕夜”等的表達(dá)都不同。陳科名在描寫自己與家人的活動(dòng)前，先總結(jié)性地描繪了過(guò)春節(jié)時(shí)人們的狀態(tài)與心情，營(yíng)造了過(guò)年喜氣洋洋的氛圍。梅錦昆則從細(xì)處入手，通過(guò)描寫倒貼“福”字和餃子里包硬幣等習(xí)俗，以小見大地凸顯了春節(jié)的意義。