作文選登

作文選登

感謝各位老師和同學給豆豆寄來的作品?，F(xiàn)在我們一起來好好欣賞這些優(yōu)秀文章吧！

I Love You

by Grace Yu

I love you when you are mad,

I love you when you are bad.

I love you when you are writing,

I love you when you are dancing.

I love you, my mum,

I love you all the time.

For my mum

于嘉楊

深圳大學城麗湖實驗小學 二年級

指導老師：鄭曼

豆豆：這篇來自二年級同學的小詩，雖然沒有華麗的辭藻、復雜的句式，但是卻透出濃濃的溫情。據(jù)說這首小詩還是小作者在媽媽生氣的時候拿出來的“殺手锏”，直接讓媽媽生氣又感動呢。這份可愛和靈氣，實在讓豆豆忍不住點個贊呀！

Put Down Your Smart Phone

Today I will give you a speech about “Putting Down Your Smart Phone（智能手機）”.

Nowadays, everybody has a smart phone. You can see people are always bending（彎曲）down their heads and playing with their phones, anywhere and anytime.

The smart phone is good. It can help us with work and study. We can read books, get news and even do some exercises through smart phones.

But if you are addicted to（對……上癮）the phone, your eyesight（視力）will get worse. You will lack（缺乏）the real and warm communication（交流）with real people. You will miss a lot of beautiful views（景色）in our real life.

So, let’s use the smart phone smartly. We can read books, draw a picture and chat（交談）with friends face to face（面對面）.

Put down the phone. Walk into real life!

龍安諾

內(nèi)蒙古農(nóng)業(yè)大學附屬小學 五年級

指導老師：肖立婷 張秀萍

豆豆：小朋友喜歡玩手機是現(xiàn)今一個受到社會廣泛關注的問題。在這篇演講稿中，小作者敏銳地抓住熱點，通過正反兩方面講述自己的觀點，條理清晰，理據(jù)充分，是一篇很不錯的議論文。

My Family

I have a big family.

There are five people in my family: my grandparents, my parents and me. My grandfather is a farmer. He often goes to the field（田地）by electric（電動的）bike. My grandmother usually waters flowers in the garden. She buys vegetables every morning. My father is short but strong. He is a worker. He is very funny. He often tells me lots of interesting things. My mother is an accountant（會計）. She can type（打字）very quickly. She often helps me with my study in her free time.

I’m a lovely boy. I’m fourteen years old. I like all kinds of sports. I want to be a player when I grow up.

This is my family. I love my family!

嚴嘉燁

寧波市北侖區(qū)岷山學校 六年級

指導老師：顧華崢

豆豆：描寫家庭成員是同學們在英語寫作時常常會遇到的題目類型。在這篇文章中，小作者采用“總—分—總”的結(jié)構(gòu)，把一個五口之家的溫馨面貌展現(xiàn)在大家面前。雖然字數(shù)不多，但小作者對每位家庭成員的描述依然生動到位，同學們在寫同類作文的時候可以模仿學習喲。

“豆豆有話說”「不限主題作品征稿」模式正在火熱進行中。你的作品可以是作文、繪畫、照片……寫你想寫的，畫你想畫的，拍你想拍的！這里是你的地盤，所以我們都“看”你的！如果是繪畫作品和照片，還需要同學們用一兩句英語簡單描述自己的作品所呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容。

經(jīng)“過五關斬六將”后，最后入選的優(yōu)秀小作者們將得到稿酬獎勵和贈刊一本喲！大家還在等什么，趕緊開動腦筋來給我們投稿吧！

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