2007—2016十年高考全國卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá)范文佳句欣賞

山東 譚鳳蘭 吉林 張 晶

2007—2016十年高考全國卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá)范文佳句欣賞

山東 譚鳳蘭 吉林 張 晶

2016年，對(duì)于高考英語科目，除北京、上海、天津、江蘇、浙江等省市繼續(xù)自主命題之外，全國其他省份都使用了全國卷。假若考生今年參加高考，當(dāng)然想要讓自己的考場作文脫穎而出、博得閱卷老師的青睞，從而拿到一個(gè)較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，那么考生在做到句子準(zhǔn)確無誤的基礎(chǔ)之上又該怎樣提高語言的表述層次呢？不妨一起梳理一下2007—2016十年高考全國卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá)范文中的佳句，并揣測(cè)一下命題人對(duì)于試題要點(diǎn)是如何寫作的。體會(huì)這些佳句并學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用，定會(huì)為考生的文章增添不少色彩。勿忘將其收入囊中哦！

1.“主從復(fù)合句”使句子更高級(jí)

①定語從句

例1要點(diǎn)：理想中筆友的條件（2007）

In my mind，she is someone who is interested in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis.

例2要點(diǎn)：祝賀蘇琳生日；感謝工作人員（2008）

I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work，because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

例3要點(diǎn)：假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith 女士來做評(píng)委（2010）

I’m Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School，which is close to your university.

例4要點(diǎn)：假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（the Internet）上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營（2012）

I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

例5要點(diǎn)：請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）（2016）

However，I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used.

②賓語從句

例6要點(diǎn)：希望通過外籍教師Peter找一位筆友（2007）

I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend.

例7要點(diǎn)：一直關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”（2008）

About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin.

例8要點(diǎn)：叔叔李明將去他所在的城市開會(huì)（2013）

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference.

例9要點(diǎn)：詢問學(xué)費(fèi)和住宿情況（2014）

I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.

③狀語從句

例10要點(diǎn)：說明為什么選擇這樣的筆友（2007）

It would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.

例11要點(diǎn)：Tracy來電話留言盡快回電（2009）

She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.

④名詞性從句

例12要點(diǎn)：說明為什么選擇這樣的筆友（2007）

With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling，taking care of pets，or whatever we have in common.

2.“非謂語動(dòng)詞”使句子更簡潔

①作定語

例13要點(diǎn)：索取蘇琳三歲生日照（2008）

By the way，could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday?

例14要點(diǎn)：你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽，希望附近某大學(xué)的外籍教師Smith 女士來做評(píng)委（2010）

I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st.

例15要點(diǎn)：演講比賽主題：人與自然；參賽選手：10名學(xué)生（2010）

Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic“Man and the Nature”.

例16要點(diǎn)：假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程（2011）

I’m Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.

例17要點(diǎn)：你校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗的短文（2015）

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.

②作狀語

例18要點(diǎn)：Tracy來電話留言：咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）見面取消（2009）

At about 1 o’clock this afternoon，Tracy called，saying that she couldnt’ meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.

3.“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”的巧用使表達(dá)更靈活

例19要點(diǎn)：從小喜愛大熊貓（2008）

I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.

例20要點(diǎn)：替房東還書（2009）

I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.

例21要點(diǎn)：告訴他你叔叔帶去他想要的那幅中國畫（2013）

I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

例22要點(diǎn)：計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意（2014）

I’ve seen your ad，and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.

例23要點(diǎn)：假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡歷（2016）

I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation，and I have just completed my application letter and resume.

4.“被動(dòng)句”使句子更別致

例24要點(diǎn)：希望獲準(zhǔn)（2012）

I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

例25要點(diǎn)：希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助（2011）

I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.

5.“委婉語”使表達(dá)更禮貌

例26要點(diǎn)：詢問他是否可以接機(jī)（2013）

Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.?

例27要點(diǎn)：給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿（2015）

Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?

例28要點(diǎn)：請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）（2016）

I know you have a very busy schedule，but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

6.“固定句型”使句子更精練

例29要點(diǎn)：外出購物（2009）

I’m going out shopping，and won’t be back until about 5∶00 pm.

例30要點(diǎn)：希望接受邀請(qǐng)（2010）

We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.

7.“固定短語”使句子更優(yōu)美

例31要點(diǎn)：希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助（2011）

I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.

例32要點(diǎn)：向?qū)Ψ綄で髱椭?013）

Also，I’d like you to do me a favor. Thank you in advance!

例33要點(diǎn)：計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語（2014）

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.

例34要點(diǎn)：“外國文化”欄目介紹（2015）

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.

本文為山東省教育科學(xué)“十三五”規(guī)劃2016—2017年度傳統(tǒng)文化教育專項(xiàng)課題“高中英語優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化教育校本課程《Glimpse of Traditional Chinese Culture》開發(fā)研究”（課題批準(zhǔn)號(hào)：BCH2017012）的系列研究成果。

譚鳳蘭 山東省淄博第一中學(xué)；張 晶 吉林省洮南第八中學(xué)）