I’m growing happily

鄭敏

I am growing and Im taller than before. In my life, I hope to grow up happily and healthy. So there are a lot of things that I need to do. First, my life is not always full of sunshine. My parents and teachers always require me to have a good grade. I also hope so. I keep on working hard, I also want to play and relax. Sometimes I argue with my parents and its terrible. Second, when Im in trouble, I should be brave enough to deal with problems. Meeting different problems, Ill regard them as challenges. Ill try to solve them with my heart. After all, Im too young. I have many opportunities to do some things. Its a good chance to do something important. Im growing happily.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：本文真實(shí)描述了小作者自己現(xiàn)在的生活，句子連貫通順，句式豐富，言辭誠(chéng)懇。有效地使用了First, second, sometimes等連接詞，井然有序地描述了自己的生活。

作者能夠按照題目的要求，生動(dòng)、詳細(xì)地刻畫自己目前的生活，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。同時(shí)也提示我們要恰當(dāng)?shù)靥幚砗门c父母之間的摩擦和沖突。

（指導(dǎo)教師：李池紅）